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It's the entanglement of details and head emotion bombs that has me reeling, as a writer. The wild crafted jazz of it. I think I'm going to take it and use it my Mind & Earth classes - if, no, okay, when I can get back there, to organising, to teaching - and I think I'll call it the Mayday Song, this style. It's transparent (so easy to learn and extend with) and powerful. Thanks, then, for that ( and yes I noticed the absence of joiners and their poetic replacements, the comma.) It's in the ecosystem of active and grounded Grace that Brian Doyle seeded in the world for us. (Sorry I'm getting teachy, which is quite reflex for me).

So what I'm really saying is thanks for the inspiration. I'm fugueing, which I meant to mean headfoggy, not quite peasoupy, but, when I look it up to check, means forgetting who you are, running away and getting somewhat dramatically hysterical. But I note that in the musical sense it means a polyphonic overlay that builds upon the layers - and there, that's what you do. We're both fugutives, then. (Sorry, I'm competing against my wife for dad jokes. She's winning, but I might be in with a chance for the next half hour or so.)

Of course I relate to all the starting notes for the fugue - tiredness, stress, burnout, body drain, hoping to achieve (while driven to make change). And the frustration rage. I haven't had laser beams, that's impressive.

So, if I haven't made it clear (which is likely), your writing, the place where you're coming from, and how you work through and do it, is inspiring. In that, I haven't been able to get through, and your willpower, despite the setbacks, has given me creative hope. That's pretty priceless.

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